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Second Look™

“Here’s How to Get the Most Profits
From Your Ad …
Get A Second Look™ Copy Critique”

Let’s have a look before anyone sees your new ad… or let’s look at any existing ad you’ve already shown but you got very little response… or let’s look at your new sales letter, or your landing webpage, or your e-mail responder series, or the most important one: Let’s take a second look at your direct mail package BEFORE you send it off to the world…?

With your Second Look™ copy critique you’ll get a fully detailed written analysis specifically of what works, what doesn’t work, what changes are recommended … and with points on the proposed changes. Get all the details on the words, design, strategy, and the offer. Including guided directions for you for revising and rewriting. Although… be aware that no copy work will be done for you with your Second Look™ copy critique.

If you want copy written? …

Hire me… but that’s different than a “Second Look™” copy critique. For details on having me write your ads: HIRE ME.

Again… getting a “Second Look™” copy critique is ideal when you want an experienced, confidential,”Second Look™”. When you want new ideas to inject life into your existing advertisement that’s no longer giving you the sales you want. With a Second Look™ copy critique you can energize your headlines, your sales copy, your offer… or ALL of these. Only so many spaces available, No More. So Don’t wait… Do It Now!

Good...Better...Best...
Good...Better...Best...

Your Second Look™ Copy Critique Choices:

G o o d
C o p y
Second Look™

A Good Copy Second Look™ is good when you want just a second opinion, a second look from an experienced eye to give you minimal pointers, tips to improve, ideas that have shown to work well.

You can choose a Good Copy Second Look™ from one of the following:

  • sales letter (for: print, audio or video);
  • one print advert;
  • one webpage, or one landing page;
  • or one email.

Here’s What You Get:

(1) SHOW-YOU: A Skype/telephone all inclusive Good Copy Second Look™ session (up to 60 minutes in length);

(2) FOLLOW IN REAL TIME A quick ‘real-time’ Good Copy Second Look™ session where you get to ‘visually’ walk step-by-step, following every detail of your written report you’ll receive ‘before’ our Skype session.

(3) A VISUAL RECORD Your Good Copy Second Look™ session is a minimal process providing you viewing of editing, minimal changes, tips and recommendations all on your computer screen “live” on google docs.

The Good Copy Second Look™ –
is minimal:
[Enquire for pricing]
Or…
Good Copy Second Look™ V.I.P. Critique …
When You Invest
TODAY…
You Can Get In On This
One-Time…
DEAL…
Put $149.25 right back
in your pocket

Today V.I.P. is…
ONLY… [Enquire for pricing]

Get Your Good Copy Second Look™ Critique Now…
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This offer may be removed without notice at anytime.
With Mentorship Copywriting Coaching
You Get 2 Minimal Second Look™ Critiques
Included Every Month
That’s More Than
$1,194.00 value!

B e t t e r
C o p y
Second Look™

A Better Copy Second Look™ can be most effective when you want a much more in depth comprehensive second opinion, a closer look from an experienced winning ad writer giving you direct pointers, tips to improve, ideas that have shown to work well… this Second Look™ is your best choice… our most popular by demand.

You can choose a Better Copy Second Look™ from one of the following:

  • sales letter (for: print, audio or video);
  • one print advert;
  • one webpage, or one landing page;
  • or one email.

Here’s What You Get:

(1) SHOW-YOU: A Skype/telephone all inclusive session (up to 90 minutes in length);

(2) FOLLOW IN REAL TIME A full ‘real-time’ interactive session where you get to walk step-by-step, following every detail of your comprehensive written report you’ll receive ‘before’ our Skype session..

(3) A VISUAL RECORD Your better copy Second Look™ critique session is a more comprehensive process than the Good Copy Second Look™ providing you viewing with editing, changes, tips and comprehensive recommendations all on your computer screen “live” on google docs.

Better Copy Second Look™ –
is comprehensive:
[Enquire for pricing]
Or…
Better Copy Second Look™ V.I.P. Critique …
When You Invest
TODAY…
You Can Get In On This
One-Time…
DEAL…
Put $224.25 right back
in your pocket

Today V.I.P. is…
ONLY… [Enquire for pricing]

Get Your Better Copy Second Look™ Critique Now…
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This offer may be removed without notice at anytime.
With Gold Copywriting Master Coaching
You Get 2 Minimal Second Look™ Critiques
Included Every Month
That’s More Than
$1,794.00 value!

T h e B e s t
C o p y
Second Look™

All Inclusive
Top-End

Receiving the Best Copy Second Look™ is only for you who demands the absolute very best. When you are not satisfied with just a more in depth second opinion, but you want… you deserve, the most inclusive, closest look, from an experienced winning ad writer. Showing you direct pointers, tips to improve, ideas and WHY these ideas are those that have shown to work well in creating winners…

You can choose a Best Copy Second Look™ from three of the following:

  • sales letter (for: print, audio or video);
  • one print advert;
  • one webpage, or one landing page;
  • or one email.

Here’s What You Get:

(1) SHOW-YOU: A Skype/telephone all inclusive session (up to 120 minutes in length);

(2) FOLLOW IN REAL TIME A full ‘real-time’ interactive session where you get to walk step-by-step, following every detail of the all inclusive report you’ll receive ‘before’ our Skype session..

(3) A COMPLETE VISUAL RECORD Your copy critique session is a fully comprehensive process providing you viewing of any editing, changes, tips and recommendations all on your computer screen “live” on google docs.

Best Copy Second Look™ –
is all inclusive:
starts at [Enquire for pricing] per critique
Or…
Your Best Copy V.I.P. Second Look™ …
When You Invest
TODAY
You Can Get In On This
One-Time…
DEAL…
Put $499.25 right back
in your pocket

Today V.I.P. is…
ONLY… [Enquire for pricing]

Get Your Best Copy Second Look™ Now…
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This offer may be removed without notice at anytime.
With Platinum
Copywriting Elite
Coaching
You Get 6 Minimal Second Look™ Critiques
Included Every Month
That’s More Than
$5,382.00 value!

 


Consultation Onsite Services Available Upon Request
(Consultation Outcall On Location – See you at your choice of location)
Consultation Outcall On Location Service
Pricing per hour(prepaid)
or all day (request details for all day consulting).

 

CLICK HERE to Request Details

World-Class Direct Response Copywriting Coaching

For ongoing copywriting coaching/training with someone who is already where you want to be, you may may prefer Copywriting Coaching. Your copywriting coaching/training combines the ease of Skype/telephone with an online ‘real-time’ Second Look™ copy critique and edit of any of your present ad copy or direct response projects.

We reserve the right to change, modify or discontinue this programme offering at anytime for any reason.

Choose From Three Different Levels of
World-Class Copywriting Coaching:

Here’s Your Choices:

  1. Premier Copywriting Mentorship

    Just starting out? Can you ask really good questions? Can you follow instruction? Premier Copywriting Mentorship gives you the hard answers. If you have only dabbled around direct-response advertising, maybe your idea of a copywriter is writing your own ads, then this is your best choice to getting started. SIGN-UP NOW!
    Or …

  2. Most popular choice: Gold Copywriting Master level

    Ideal for you if you have a small company (or a company that wants to be larger and more profitable) that has already worked with some direct-response projects, maybe you even hired a copywriter, well… this level is your best choice. SIGN-UP NOW!
    Or …

  3. The Top-End, All-Inclusive, Platinum Copywriting Elite level

    When you want to most benefits of a coaching relationship. Maybe you have created a multi-million dollar company (or company that wants to be) … you already have several direct-response projects, you have hired one or more copywriters or you have an on-staff copywriter, then this is the level of membership you will be happy with. SIGN-UP NOW!

But… Don’t Take My Word For It…

Read below of several business people just like you who put their own business over-the-top with just one World-Class Copywriting Coaching Session or Second Look™ Copy Critique.

P.S.   If You Prefer, You Can… CLICK HERE to schedule your own risk free marketing consulting session now via telephone or Skype.

Here’s What Some Successful Copywriting Coaching
and Second Look™ Copy Critique Clients Are Saying …


Get started Now with your own Second Look™ Copy Critique today!

Just click here and you will be guided to a page with an confidential evaluation with several detail questions about your business and your advert/sales letter to fill in (i.e. product or service, sales volume, biggest challenges to hitting goals, etc.) … what you’re looking to accomplish (i.e. sales goals, etc.).

Once you have provided your information on our secure sender, most importantly your name and your info will be moved to the top of my list, reviewed and you are guaranteed a response email or call from me or one of my staff within 72-hours.

P.P.S.   Again… If You Prefer, You May… Immediately schedule a risk free consulting session with me via telephone or Skype.

Or … You can CLICK HERE to get started with your absolutely free, no-cost, confidential evaluation.



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